Moriah Leila

I thought the photo was beautiful. However, I found the hairtie on her arm distracting. Also I would have removed the chipped fingernail polish. Paying attention to the minor details ...

This poem reminded me of an assignment I had to do back in high school. We were supposed to write a poem about ourselves and the title had to be ...

Wow, good job. I felt like you explained the relationship between God and Adam well. I really liked the part about having a doctor appoint an engineer or vice versa. ...

I had never read this poem before, but I really like it. I think it is hilarious and I like that it is straight to the point. I totally agree ...

I am not very fond of poetry or very talented at analyzing it, but I thought I'd get outside my comfort zone. So I choose How Beastly The Bourgeois Is ...

Hey there, great story! I loved the first chapter and thought this chapter was just as intruiging. The one thing I have to point out is that you changed tenses. ...

Hi there! I will be reviewing your work today. Basically, I will do a few nitpicks and then do some overall commentary at the very end. Hopefully you will find ...

Well, I am tallish. But my hair is auburn and I have blue-green eyes. I'd say you have dirty blone hair and blue eyes, with freckles.

My only complaint is the size, is there any way you can resize your drawings? I've noticed that quite a few of them are very large and so it is ...

Hi there Luciano, my name is Lisa! Welcome to YWS. I'm sure you're going to love it here. I just have a few of questions for you, to get to ...

brown hair, short, fair skin, and hazel eyes. Oh, and you probably have really cold hands too.

Trying to deep fry a turkey without blowing up my house.

I agree with Lena and poemperson, the nose would probably look better without the extra line on the right hand side. Maybe erase a bit of it, so that it ...

Hi, me again! Glad to see that you've been able to post some more. You've done a colorful job of explaining how Trinity became pregnant, but as Lena pointed out, ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS. If you haven't already you should visit the Welcome Mat and tell us a little about yourself. I really enjoyed this story, even though it ...